Thursday, January 11, 2007

Thursday January 11th, 2007: "In the dark"

Thursday January 11th, 2007: "In the Dark"

While you lay in the dark
I was sweating, thinking about you.

While I was laying in bed,
I was sweating, while thinking about us.

While you were lying in your bed
I was dreaming of your skin.

While I was laying awake in bed
I was licking your earlobe.

And then, I woke up in bed
And discovered that I was lying next to you

And then, I buried my head deep inside you
And sighed

3 comments:

Malissa said...

this poem just makes me want to cry...i dont know why, but it does...

it seems so unreal to me that you love your wife SSOOOOOO much!!! i just dont understand how you can love someone so deeply and strongly like you do your wife...i guess its just cuz ive never experienced that kind of love yet...

but this poem makes me wonder what life will be when i find my true love; like i wonder if my relationship will be as great and strong and just as wonderful as yours has been...

this poem pretty much says everything about your relationship with your love, well at least how you feel about it anyway...

...i think ive sed too much...

anyway mark(ie), i thot that this was absolutely a beautiful poem...

great job!!!

Anonymous said...

And his wife loves him just the same. What's really miraculous is that we still feel the same way after 30 years filled with 25% joy and 75% hardships and challenges.

Markbnj said...

CB: STOP Commenting as ANOM, you are driving me CRAZY!!!


Mal: don't worry... Just remember to fall in love with your best friend, not to marry someone who's hot, or you have good sex with...
'cause one day, they won't be hot, and
(perish the thought) that one day good sex won't happen...

but friendship is forever!
(better then diamonds...
Mark