Thursday, May 17, 2007

Wed 17-May-07: Sadness, Alone

Sadness falls, close to home.
My hands sigh, as they type this tome.
Inwards I cry at my plight
I wannna run far into the night
Because I just feel so all alone.


Anna said...

Simple but true.

writerwoman said...

I like the first line. I don't think you need to try as hard to rhyme though. The sentiments expressed are so heartfelt and emotional that they would be just as strong without a particular rhyme scheme, I would say.